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Hoshika-Pichu
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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 10:20 pm 
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THREAD GET!

I love those faces in the last panel.

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Merlin
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Aerodactyl could have been more dynamic.

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Aerodactyl used FLY!
Wild Katie fled!

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Red hat is back!

Red and gray hat!
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This is a great improvement from the last comic, I'd say. I actually laughed at this one.

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Whoa, most of those panels aren't squares! That will make it hard to edit...


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Zachy
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I laughed. We're making progress.

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SBKT
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You guys... should probably talk to her yourself.

I recall one where it wasn't funny and it was the survey one. That just frustrated me.
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Merlin
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What's your point, Fry.

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Trennicus
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This is going to have to take all of my editing skills at once.

Also I like how funny this one is.

Destruction is hilarious.

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Roww.

Nice to see you playing with the shape of panels a bit more - the angles don't necessarily have to have such an extreme 'lean' though.

Also, the buildings would look more like buildings if you'd put some windows on them (just coloured blocks would've done the trick) - this would help with the sense of scale too.

EDIT: I've only just noticed the buildings in the distance in panel one - they probably could've been a little darker or something to better bring them to the reader's attention (because they're an important part of the comic).

It's a fairly straightforward comic idea, but it's nice to see something like this again.

Good job.

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Indigo_Dingo
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SBKT wrote:
You guys... should probably talk to her yourself.

I recall one where it wasn't funny and it was the survey one. That just frustrated me.
Whats her username?

And editing shouldn't be too hard. With all the people that beam killed, the games rules mean Katie gets half their cash. Just use the raining cheddar thingy.

Edit: Cheddar? What the hell? Why's it doing that?


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Sir_auronDX
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Did someone say moolah?
also spot the paradox
simple. katie wins and gets her win cheddar. and i think even if hyper beam didnt miss it'd vaporize anything caught in and behind it.
p.s. ignore failure parts like my inabilty to remove stuff after being awake for 36 hours
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and a simple ending
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was thinking of making katies "face when she draws" fire the lazer instead

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Sir_auronDX
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Okay i cant beleive i saw this after doing my last edit there but this was hard
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The Aerodactyl snapping the DS one was great.

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Clear Blue
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Crazy Artist wrote:
It's a pokemon battle, and you have your pokemon use some like ultra destructive move Roar of Time or Hyperbeam or something like that, and then you see it miss the pokemon and go hit some house or city or something in the background and completely devastates it, then the last panel is you and whatever pokemon you used with 'oh shit' faces, and the classic pokemon game text box saying "Insert Move here missed!"
Thank you for giving Katie an idea! :D

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