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I made wrote this after i posted The Kid in the White Suit.
Hope you all like it.
Rain Hitting the Ground
“If I die before I wake” the girl turned at his singing, dressed in all white, bleeding from his face, carrying a white bag. The cold wind against his back, the rain hitting his short dark hair. “At least in heaven . . .” he stopped midway, she squinted, looking closely at him. A smile was on his face, he started to sway back and forth, bleeding from his nose and mouth, and she could still make out his smile on his face. He fell onto his back, not even trying to brace himself. He reached out his arms, the cold cement under him, reaching out, as if he was trying to grab the dark clouds. She saw his lips move but couldn’t make out what he said.
She stayed under the roof, keeping the rain from hitting her. The purple and black stripped shirt, dark black shirt waving as the wind howls past her, making her blond hair go over her face. She was focused on the kid lying on the ground. Seeing him reach into his bag, pulling out a small blue box, he flipped it open, and took out a toothpick. Placing it in his teeth, looking up at the sky, as the rain hit his face. He put the box away, letting the rain mix with his blood, as it ran down his face, onto the cold, hard, concrete. She couldn’t help but wonder what happened to him, and why he was smiling. She felt her phone vibrate, pulling it out, the text message on the screen. Quickly reading it, and putting it back into her bra, as the kid started to get up. Brushing himself off, as if it would help at all, he took off the top of his suit, and let it fall to the ground. Blood dripping onto his chest, creating red splotches on his tank top. Sticking his hands in his pockets, leaving his bag on the ground, and headed on his way. She watched him walk the whole block away, before running out into the rain, and grabbing the stranger’s bag. Chasing after him, finally catching up with him. Tapping his shoulder gently, he quickly turned around, the toothpick in his mouth, staring at her. A huge gash across his nose, his lip ripped open, and his right eye closed, with blood dripping from the cut above his eye. She could cry at the sight of him, looking into his pitch black eyes. Smiling, and with both hands out in front of her, holding the bag. “You forgot this” He moved the toothpick from on side of his mouth, to the other side. He shook his head, turned around, and started to walk down the empty street. Looking at the cold ground, as it stares back, she reached into the bag, feeling something rough. She pulled out the blank white mask, on the front was carved the name Vincent. Staring at it, and running her fingertips over the name. Under her breath, “Vincent” she whispered. She looked up, he had stopped walking, saying it again, “Vincent” and than again, yelling. “Vincent!” He turned around, the smile gone from his face, spitting the tooth pick at her feet. Walking fast towards the girl, the cold rain hitting his face.
Standing in front of her, she whispered “Vincent” he reached out and grabbed the mask with his left hand. The girl looked at him, “My, my name is Rain” she stuttered as Vincent spat blood onto the group. He looked at her, in her green eyes, Rain dropped the bag, and looked away. “I’m sorry” rain whispered, doing a short jab into Vincent’s nose, followed by a knee to the stomach. The blood getting all over her fist, getting ready to strike again. Sharp pain from his broken ribs flashed through Vincent’s body, he became dazed, trying to focus his left eye on rain. Seeing her fist coming towards him he grabbed it with his right hand. Rain tried to pull back, but his grip was too strong. He twisted her arm clockwise, her body following suit. Vincent than thrust kicked her in the chest, sending her back. Rains soft bare arms dragging across the ground, as she spiraled across it. Looking at the wet cement under her, hearing footsteps coming towards her. She felt her hair being pulled up, as she was yanked up onto her feet. Looking forward, blood going over her eyes, she could barely see anything, standing there, wobbling to keep balance. Seeing Vincent, his odd smile back on his face. Vincent jumped up, his feet as high as Rains face, feeling the tip of his shoe against her face. She fell down, blood going over her eyes, shaking her head, and getting up. All she could see was Vincent’s smile, as she threw a right hook at him. Quickly dodging it, Vincent turned around, and started to walk away. Rain started to cry tears filled her eyes, as she started to run at him. She jumped up, and drop kicked Vincent in the back. He fell down, face first, as she started to kick him, and turned him over. Vincent looked up at Rain, her blond hair waving in the wind, her striped shirt ripped at the sleeves, her skirt blowing in the wind. She kicked him, over and over in his broken ribs, as he felt one piece into his heart. He coughed up blood, and tried to get up, the mask lying next to him, using his hands to push himself up. Rain pushed him down with her foot, and sat on his stomach. Throwing punch after punch into Vincent’s face. Darkness was all he could see, but he felt every punch, lying there, almost lifeless, blood splattering everywhere. His pain slowly fading away, as hear someone running towards them, metal scraping against the ground. Rain's punches stopped, she looked up, only to see a bat come in contact with her face. She fell back, her head landing on Vincent’s right leg. “If I die before I wake” hearing the familiar lyrics, feeling someone push Rain off his body. Hearing humming as the person picked up Vincent, and put his mask on his face. Vincent’s feet dragged on the ground, it seemed as if hours went by, as his back was laid up against a cold wet wall. He heard the scraping of a bat on the ground, slowly fading away. The rain stopped, he could tell that the sun came out, for he felt the sun’s rays on him, warming him.
On another note, if you have an idea for a stroy, lemme know.
I have a lot of spare time. Lolz
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>With that, please excuse me<
Last edited by C. T. on Fri Feb 27, 2009 10:57 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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