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Please excuse this crap, I hate to burden people here with it, just felt like posting it. (any glaring grammatical errors are solely based on style)

The window offered little light to his slowly diminishing soul’s luster. It hurt him. His ears ached from the constant slamming and thrashing. He didn’t understand it, how could he? His family was slowly growing apart. A mirror with a single crack will eventually reveal it’s spider web of flaws, he thought to himself. This was that moment. Everything was unraveling. It was sickening to her the words being tossed around like they held absolutely no meaning. The simple idea that “fucking”, “shit”, and “daisies” carried no weight insulted him, and he couldn’t stand it. He didn’t use words like that, how could he? The power they held was too much, they could crush a person. They were crushing him. A six ton weight slowing pushing his legs down, splintering his bones, the sound of his body breaking causing a nauseous feeling in the pit of his stomach. Blame was being tossed around like unwanted trash, baggage from years past. He didn’t want it, why would he? Trash that reeked of self-loathing and repressed emotion, his gag reflex couldn’t take it. Tears began to roll, his vision became cloudy. His throat was taut with fear and sadness. It hurt and made it difficult to breathe. Strange though it seems, that lack of breath in turn caused a lack of oxygen creating a euphoria, if not for just a moment. But like all good things, it was over almost as soon as it began, a spell broken by the yelling that plagued his life before. The trash began to pile up, again. It was a landfill in the making. It seemed that it always ended up on his doorstep, weighing down his meek shoulders. He could hear it from the other room, If you cared why is he sitting there in his room in front of the computer? He didn’t like being dragged into these things. It wasn’t his fault. Why should he become fodder? But somehow he became a tool. A tool for hate and a weapon meant to damage the reasoning of another. He didn’t want to be used in such a way, who would want to? The words continued to fly over his head, bombs dropped on his feeble shelter he called a psyche. Why would they care? He’s a resilient boy, it’ll bounce right off of him. Sadly, the kindergarten chants of yesteryear did little when you’ve grown up. He wasn’t rubber. He was flesh. He had feelings that words could rip to shreds. Tiny, meaningless shreds. He was tired of it all. He thought of so much he could be doing instead of listening to this bickering in the kitchen, in the den, in the living room, in the hallway. It surrounded and engulfed every fiber of his being and he was sick of it. He didn’t know what to do next. The music he so assuredly clung to did little to soften the verbal punches that were swiftly slamming his head against a wall. A hole was going to develop in his brain, he was sure of it. It would eventually fill itself with unwanted garbage. Oh please, someone take this from me, the tears burning his skin, a poison that would slowly corrode his skin. Nothing would drown out the sounds, This shit is your fault! Fuck this house! Fuck what you think! Each word was an arrow piercing him, each in a part he held dearest. This always happened, it will always happen. It won’t change, why would it? It was a cycle. It was disgusting cycle, one that he knew all to well. Someone would come home. Someone would be fine for a day, maybe a week if luck was with him. But then, the fuse would be lit. Someone would say something, someone would take it the wrong way, someone would get angry, and he would be forced to sit in his room and witness, not with his eyes but with his ears. An audio assault, worse than that of a sonic boom. He couldn’t stand it. Someone had ruined Christmas. Someone had ruined Thanksgiving. Someone had ruined his quiet life. But he couldn’t hate that someone. He knew he was supposed, but how could he? Someone had called your mother a whore. Someone had thrown around gut-wrenching accusations. Someone had planted the seeds of doubt. How could I trust I anyone, if what that someone had said was true. His stomach was rolling at the thoughts racing through his head. The world was not what it appeared and he wished it would be, but why would it be? He turned to the computer, his escape. His lifeline. They don’t yell, they don’t judge. He began to type, the words pouring from his fingers, tears in the form of words staining the page with what he felt. The blot of ink was small, but slowly expanded, eventually beginning to truly convey what he wanted to be told. His ideas, once wheels rolling in sporadic motion, began to align in such a way that would be understood. No longer was his gut rolling, but instead his fingers moving in fluid motion in time with the beat of his conscience. His own beat. No longer would he take what he heard as fact. No longer would the verbal warfare affect him as it had before. No longer would his poisonous tears stain his bed sheets, his skin, his clothing. It was done. It wasn’t perfect. No one would really understand it, but his inkling that writing it out would soothe the inflammation of his emotions proved correct. He was relieved. The six tons were lifted, and his shattered bones began the painful process of healing.

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Paragraphs.

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Didn't feel a need too.

It was one continuous thought so it was one continuous paragraph.


edit; I understand what you mean, it is a huge wall of text, but that is just how it happened. I just copypasted from a text document, where it wasn't such an intense block of words.

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EDIT: Herp derp forgot to mention this is for the thing Mander wrote. Sorry it took so long; been kinda busy with other stuff. Hope this helps some

Is the style supposed to be sort of childlike? If not, that's not meant to be insulting.

“ who would become especially important later.” Maybe shouldn’t state it so plainly

“ He was very far away, because his voice was so loud he could be heard from miles away.” Doesn’t really make sense

“ the Friends made Judges, special people who could make the kings stop fighting.” How?

What kind of story do you have set in the world?


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Chinmaster wrote:
Is the style supposed to be sort of childlike?


Yes.

I kind of imagined it as an adult explaining the world to a very small child, so he glossed over the more gritty details like the Judges (Their job is to kill kings).

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What kind of story do you have set in the world?


Kind of an Arthurian legend type story. Noble people do noble things in a fantasy setting.

And Wizards are actually important again. Wizards have been seriously mistreated in recent years.


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Mr. Mander wrote:
Chinmaster wrote:
Is the style supposed to be sort of childlike?


Yes.

I kind of imagined it as an adult explaining the world to a very small child, so he glossed over the more gritty details like the Judges (Their job is to kill kings).


You might want to make that more clear in the beginning then


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Whoops here's another Robot story.

I desperately request feedback on this because there is a chance for me to win $250 from it AND I WOULD VERY MUCH LIKE TO HAVE THAT.

Also I guess it could be construed as a backstory for Trainwreck if you wanted it to. Whatever floats your boat.

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The giant machine strode through the forest without a care. Its massive size pushed trees out of the way and crushed them underfoot. Hundreds of birds were fleeing his unintended wave of destruction.

The Robot’s face was blank, except for a pair of eyes. Its body was plated in steel and copper plates. Gears could be heard churning as it walked.

The machine sat down by a lake. It had decided to stop walking for a while. Nearby there was a wooden dock.

“Hello,” a fisherman said, unperturbed by the house-sized machine that had sat down feet away.

“Hello,” The machine replied. It dipped it’s mechanical feet into the lake.

“You broke a lot of trees back there.”

“I did. Breaking things is what I do.” The Robot pounded his metal knuckles into his palm for emphasis. It was not angry or hateful when it spoke. It was content with the fact that it broke things.

“Why do you break things?”

“Because it is what I am built to do,” The Robot said contentedly. “And if I didn’t do what I was built to do then I wouldn’t be a very good robot.”

The Fisherman nodded. The Robot flexed his hands, as if he was breaking an imaginary tree.

“So what do you break?”

“Things that need breaking. Those trees were in my way, so I broke them.”

“But what if a house was in your way?”

“I don’t break houses,” The Robot said. “People live in those.”

“So you don’t break people either?”

“Only if somebody tells me to,” The Robot said.

“Has someone ever told you to?” The Fisherman couldn’t help but ask.

“No. But part of my brain says that I could if someone asked.”

“Must be nice to be a robot,” The Fisherman said. “Your brain tells you exactly what you can and can’t do. Makes life real simple.”

“No, not really,” The Robot said. “I can do things my brain doesn’t tell me to do.”

The Robot paused and stared at the fisherman.

“Can I tell you a secret?”

“Go ahead.”

The Robot put a hand by where his mouth would be, if he had one. He lowered his mechanical voice to a whisper.

“I didn’t have to break those trees. I just don’t like them.”

The fisherman chuckled silently.

“And why don’t you like trees?”

“It’s not trees I don’t like…I think its forests. When I see a tree by itself I’m just fine, but forests make me so mad!”

The Fisherman cast his line out again. The Robot watched the orange bobber fly through the air.

“So where did you come from?”

“I don’t know,” The Robot said. “I just remember being in a forest, and that I was supposed to break things, but also that there are things I’m not supposed to break.”

“What are the things you aren’t supposed to break?”

The Robot held up his hands and started counting off on his fingers. He dropped a finger each time he said a word.

“Houses, Buildings, Cars, Cliffs, Promises-“

“What kind of fool programs a robot not to break promises?”

“I-I don’t know. It is just a thing I am not supposed to break.” The Robot’s voice was laden with synthesized guilt.

“…Have you broken a promise?”

“Yes.” The robot looked down at its reflection in the lake.

“What promise did you break?”

“I don’t know…I can’t remember making the promise or who I made it with, just that I broke it.”

“Feh. You’re a stupid robot, you know that?”

“I’m just meant to break things,” The Robot said sadly. “I’m not meant to be smart.”

“Well, you should be. Ain’t no use for a stupid robot.”

“I don’t need to be smart,” The Robot grunted. “I can break things just fine.”

“You’ve got a computer for a brain, idiot. If you aren’t smart then you’re a useless robot.”

Something buzzed in the Fisherman’s ear. His tone changed.

“Well, you might as well stay a while,” The Fisherman said kindly. His kindness seemed forced. “Stick around, don’t move.”

The Robot was staring at its hand unblinkingly. The Fisherman watched it nervously, hoping it wouldn’t move. He wouldn’t get paid if it left.

“I don’t like you,” The Robot said suddenly. The Fisherman broke into a cold sweat.

“W-Why?”

“You ask too many questions. And then you’re mean, and then you become nice once the people in your ear talk.”

The Fisherman’s eyes widened.

“I could hear that, you know. I have very good hearing. ‘Stop insulting it or it will run away’, that’s what your ear said.”

The Fisherman dropped his rod in a panic. The voices in his ear were going crazy. They were yelling at him to run away. He obeyed them gladly. The Robot watched him vanish into what was left of the forest. There was something else in the forest as well.

A bunch of men in green uniforms stepped out of the forest. Parts of the robot’s head were starting to whirr, circuits were ready to activate, but they wouldn’t. Not yet.

The Robot sat there, listening to its brain buzz. It didn’t care about these new people, nor did it acknowledge them. It was waiting for its brain to tell it what to do.

One last man in green stepped out of the forest. Part of the Robot’s brain clicked. That man was important.

“Hello, Experiment.”

There was a final click in the Robot’s brain. It recognized that voice. Hidden computer chips in its brain flared to life. A voice that was not its own began speaking.

“Hello General. I’m glad you’re here in person. Undoubtedly you’ve tried to capture this machine many times before.”

The Robot examined its body, looking for the unfamiliar voice. The General looked on with equal curiosity.

“You’ve failed, course. I know this because this machine will not, and can not be used by someone like you. It was built to break, yes. But it was not built to break for you.”

A few more chips started to whirr in the Robot’s brain. The voice suddenly sounded familiar.

“It was built to break you.”

The Voice Recognition was finalized. The Robot stood up. The men in green trembled.

Within seconds, every soldier, even the General, was dead. A sweeping blow from the machine snapped their bones into powder instantaneously.

“Oh my,” The Robot said.

It stared down at the broken mess it had left behind. Its right arm was covered in a red blossom of carnage.

“I guess I was supposed to break them.”

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Everybody pay more attention to Mander's story than the continuation of mine, though I'm sure that's a given. ANYWHO:

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Now being in a prison cell is scary. I couldn't see past my own nose, and water dripped from every crack in the ceiling. It wasn't a dungeon; it was on the highest floor of the tower. I didn't know exactly how far up I was, but I knew that an escape by breaking through the wall was out of the question. Whatever I could do in this world, I couldn't develop wings and fly. And when I sat down, I put myself right on a puddle of something, I don't know what. I scooched over a bit, but something squeaked and fled. I presumed it was a rat. I couldn't see well enough to tell. God knows what kind of things develop in a place like this. But I got my answer; there was a flapping of tiny wings. I watched in amazement as a small dark shape removed itself from the floor and fluttered out through the bars of my cage. Now that my eyes were adjusting I could see well enough that it was some sort of rat-bird thing. But then, as soon as it lifted off the ground, a larger shadow swooped down and caught it in its mouth. There was the sound of flesh being torn from bones, and a satisfied purr as something licked its paws. Things were really, really weird here. And things got weirder as my jailer revealed himself.

He was about my height, which is all I could really tell about him. At least he hadn't developed wings, as far as I could tell anyway. I squinted to make sure. At this point, I was scared I was going to grow wings. As if he saw me squinting, he answered my questions. "The rats here were part of an experiment." His voice was smooth like silk. I didn't like it. "So when they escaped and started breeding, we fought them back with flying cats." Right, because that makes total sense. Got any flying pigs? He resumed his little speech. "Hello, I'm to guard your cell for today. My name's-"
"Hang on a second," I interrupted him. "Why did you breed flying rats in the first place?"
I wished I could see the look he gave me. "Why not? We wanted to see if it was possible. Start with rats, maybe one day end up with flying horses. Anyway, my name's Steve."
"Okay, that makes better se- Wait, your name is Steve?" I stared. "Steve? But that..." I started laughing before I could even finish my sentence. "That's ridiculous!"
"I'll have you know I am a demon of the finest quality," he said stiffly. The guy was probably used to it by now. I sobered up.
"Okay, so you're Steve. I'm sure you know my name already. Why am I here again?"
"Well, you've been given a two-day period to make your decision. Until then, you are to be considered the enemy." Something skittered across my foot. I payed it no mind.
"Two day period to decide? C'mon, it's not like I can say no." I stared sightlessly at the wall.
"Many Heroes have been known to sacrifice everything, things even more important than their lives."
"...I know." I said softly.

They had my brother. There was nothing I could do. If I refused, they killed him. If I agreed, then went back on our deal, they killed him. I didn't know where he was being held, so I couldn't save him, and there was no possibility of him saving himself. After all, he was out cold, at least until my work was done. If it had been my life on the line, I might have been able to say no. But I had no say over who lives and who dies, and whose life is more important than somebody else's. I just couldn't do it. I didn't know what the Villains were out to do this time, but I knew it couldn't be good. And I was probably there to do the dirty work. The killing, the maiming, the leading of the vast army over continents to intercept the small band of Heroes... things like that. Things that weren't really my thing. It's all fine and dandy seeing these things on the big screen, but when you really got involved it was heart wrenching. But I still couldn't say no. It was all I could do to keep myself from having a break down right then and there. I'm not a stable person. My mental abilities aren't beyond amazing. I cry when I'm frustrated, when I'm depressed, when I'm lonely, even when I'm angry. The best I could do was keep myself from feeling. Losing it would only satisfy them. I wasn't going to let that happen. And I was going to get out of this. And if I died trying, well, at least I could get my brother out safely. That was more important to me at the moment.

Goddammit. I clenched my fist, gritting my teeth. I didn't know what to do. But then the demon named Steve leaned down and whispered. I strained to catch it. "...it's not as bad as it seems. Quite frankly, I do not agree with the practice of kidnapping to ensure a Hero defects. Heroes should stay Heroes, and Villains should stay Villains." Well, well, well. What was this, alignmentism? "I'm sure many of the others agree."
"But that's not enough." I accidentally let a note of despair into my voice, and winced.
"Don't get me wrong, I'm not sympathizing with you. You could die in a ditch for all I care." He straightened up. There went that glimmer of hope. "In fact, I'd much prefer it if that happened. Things would go back to the old way then." I sighed. The noise was lost in the darkness of my cell.
Then a new voice entered the fray. "Dammit, Steve! We told you not to talk to the prisoner!" I smirked again at the usage of his name. But it didn't comfort me to know that there were others guarding this prison.
"Silence yourself!" Steve snapped back.


For those who haven't seen it before, I've posted snippets from the thing I'm working on on-and-off.
I need something else to write about.

Also Mander you gave me the idea to write a bit more about my character's past, too.

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"Are you sure you've got everything, Mosquito?"

"Sure I do." There was the sound of rustling fabric. "And I told you, stop calling me that stupid nickname."

"Oh, you sure you remembered everything? Even your-"

"Yeah, mom. Got everything. If you're so unsure, you can take this stupid mission back, too." The girl pinned her hair up with a red ribbon, tying it in a bow at the back. The remaining cloth fell down her back. "You know that I think the dead should stay dead."

"But, dear!" Her mother feigned shock. "He was your brother! And the heir. What will we do without him?"

"He did something stupid, and he paid for it. You know him. Is he really going to learn from this?" She stuck her tongue out. The older woman was silent. "Well, I'm off. Catch ya later." She jumped off her front step and hit the ground with silent feet. The girl began to trudge off, although she was eager to get away from that place. Every breath there suffocated her. But she had a duty to it. That was the law of her family. No matter how many of them had attempted to run away... they always came back. They were specialists, all of them, and most of them incredibly deadly. The girl herself was a weapons specialist.

Her brother had been a magic specialist. One day he'd taken on a foolish quest, one usually reserved only for her father, who was considered one of the deadliest men in the realm. He'd died in the attempt. Unfortunately her family seemed stuck in their ways, refusing to let a woman become head of the family, so now she was off on her own quest;

"Seven keys..." She muttered to herself. Softly, all around her, snow began to fall. "And your heart's desire."

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NO EVERYONE IGNORE LYRA I AM MORE IMPORTANT

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THAT'S WHAT I SAID DAMMIT

edit: Derp I was in the middle of editing my post when you posted. WAYTOGO.

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I like the style, Mander. Just like reading a children's book.


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And she lay there. He was hours late, her wounds were already bled dry, and the snow around her frozen corpse had already been soaked in the red ichors that a living being would require. Her eyes were open and her mouth was caught mid gasp. The death hadn’t been instantaneous, obviously. A massive gash had been entrenched into her mid-section. Her assailant had left her to die in the harsh winter, knowing full well that she had no hope. Too imagine her dying, struggling for life, brought an unimaginable pain to him. To imagine that it wouldn’t happen if he had been quicker.
He let her die.
He cried out to what malevolent god had abandoned her in her hour of need, it was his fault. That god had a chance to save her, to save someone so innocent. No god would ever let her die. No true god worthy of devotion and prayer. This had all been engineered by a demon; a foul conspirator who sought the anguish of men.
Godless.
And who could he have to help her? Who did she have to help her? Why did no one help her? Why did no one escort her to what stupid trivial task that she had to perform?! To what end did she think it was a good idea to waltz out under such a remote bridge in such extreme weather conditions!? This isn’t possible; this isn’t the girl he knew. She would never be so dumb.
Helpless.
If this is a world where the innocent die and the depraved roam free, then there is no justice for men and as such there is no man. For without justice barbarity is presented. Animals, everywhere: corrupt, insane, uncontrollable, savage, bloodthirsty hellhounds.
Revenge
Yes.
Yes, that’s it.
This is insanity.
Such blood spilled, and for what reason, exactly?
None. There is no justification for the murder of a child.
He was going to find the bastard, the monster that sought her out and killed her, and he was going to tear him to pieces. He was going to shoot him until that monster turned into nothing but a fine jelly. To eviscerate him, annihilate him entirely and then obliterate him from existence in absolution.
His blood boiled, fuelled by the atrocity at which he had seen, at which he was helpless to prevent. Some would say that murder would have run through his mind, but it wasn’t murder to him. It was nothing more rudimentary than when a police man arrests a criminal. He would invoke justice upon a society that was absolutely foreign to the word.


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I decided to build a boat in dwarf fortress. A big, towering ocean liner, something to drive fear into the hearts of goblins everywhere. Something to tackle mighty waves in an instant, and stand ready, declaring "We are dwarves, and we will master the very ocean itself." Bold? Perhaps. Rash? More than likely. Glorious beyond belief? Sign me up.

Obviously I couldn't jump straight into the construction. No no, there was a lengthy preface my friend. I needed to set up base first. A head quarters, in which to plan - to concieve. The base was indeed set up. A few workshops, a small barracks, a servicable dining hall... it was quaint, but it did the job.

The poor choice in my geographical selection soon dawned on me. Most of the immediate area was ocean. So, aside from the tiny farms we managed to set up, and the few piles of fish that were available, there wasn't much food around. Things were looking a little grim already, and construction of my mighty ocean liner had yet to begin, let alone the planning thereof.

The ground was barely fertile, and there were not many herbs to be gathered to tide us over until the trade caravan approached. I was left with no recourse, my choice was clear. Hunting would be necessary. I don't like sending my dwarfs hunting. It's... dangerous work. Too risky. No dwarf should have to face death, let alone while scavenging for food rather than protecting their homes and loved ones. Regardless, there was no other path for us to take. It was hunt, or starve.

I wasn't quite sure what my next step was to be. How do you chose which dwarf are to risk death, and which aren't? How do you assign importance values? After some turmoil, I decided to entrust the task to the settlement's mayor, Nomal. The wellbeing of the dwarfs was her responsibility, and it was her duty to keep them fed. No matter the cost.

We didn't even have any armour. No protection at all. Nor did we have any weapons. Nomal went to the stockpile and picked up the only thing that came close; a goddamn mining pick. She was prepared to hunt and kill feral beasts with nothing but the clothes on her back and a mining pick, just so the other dwarves didn't go hungry.

Ingris stopped her at the door. Her husband. He went into the stockpile, silently retrieved the only other pick, and came back to her. They embarked into the wilderness, fully prepared for whatever awaited them. Together.

They turned out to be quite adept at it. Nomal was quieter and more careful, more patient, but Ingris was quicker and stronger. They worked together quite well indeed. Foxes, mostly. A few deer. An aligator every once in a while. Each of them always looked the other in the eyes with that same, worried face before they left. The face that said "this might be it." They kept at it though. They had too.

The caravan made it's way to our little corner of the world eventually. The other dwarves had been crafting away, and we had more than enough to trade for the seeds and meat we so desperately needed. Nomal and Ingris were away from the camp when the caravan came, and the dwarves weren't sure when it would be around again, let alone how long it would linger now. Datan had to do the trading instead of Nomal. It was peculiar that the fortress' trader wasn't available, but the caravan made no objection. Datan seemed rather skilled at it.

Ingris and Nomal had no idea the caravan had arrived. They had been gone for quite some time. Last they heard, the food stockpiles were completely empty, and if they didn't return with something, anything, well... it wasn't an appealing thought to say the least.

Unfortunately, the land was barren. They had over hunted in their quest for survival. No beasts were to be found. Ingris knew what had to be done. His heart was heavy with the thought, but he was resigned to his fate, whatever it may be. Taking Nomal by the hand, Ingris led her to the edge of the mountains, directly over looking the vast ocean. It was here that the small volcano lay.

It was dangerous. It had always been dangerous, but not like this. Then again, they had no choice. To their understanding, it was this, or starve. Ingris insisted that he take point, and Nomal wait by the side until he managed to draw out a single creature for them to attack. It was raining heavily. Nomal would never forget the rain, not after today. Ingris climbed down into the depths of the volcano, and spotted a lone magmaman. Neither of them had ever seen one before, but everybody had heard the tales.

Ingris whistled at it, then jolted up toward the surface as he saw the beast give chase. It was flying after him as though it was made of some kind of magical force that ignored anything which might hamper it's progress. He barely made it out again before it was on him, the searing claws rending and burning his flesh within seconds. Nomal struck the creature again and again with her pick, but it took the furious beating as if she was a child smacking her fists on her father's back. She kept swinging until she was sure the pick would break, and the horrible thing eventually collapsed on the ground. Nomal wasn't certain how long she had been attacking it for, but evidently it had been long enough that Ingris had been reduced to a pile of ash. All that was left of the man she loved was a single sock.

She wept.

She wept and wept and wept and wept for hours in the pouring rain, crouched over a dirty old ruined sock.

Eventually, she managed to compose herself. The magmaman's corpse was still there. The fortress still needed food. She pocketed the sock, and then hefted the beast's remains onto her back. It was hot still, but the rain had cooled it enough that she wasn't being seriously burned. Ingris carried the thing to the fortress in the torrential rains. It took quite some time, but on her return she saw the caravan leaving in the distance. She dropped the magmaman on the ground, and saw the stockpile heaving with fresh foods, and enough seeds to keep the farms autonomous for years to come.

Nomal had no words. She went to her office, and sat at her desk, staring at the wall. Eventually she remembered the sock. She pulled it out, and put it on the table. It was just a muddy, ruined piece of cloth now. It had been perhaps a half day now since her tangle with the beast. Since she last saw Ingris' beatiful eyes staring at her. Since she'd felt his warm, safe embrace. She collapsed on the desk, crying and shrieking for the longest time.

Suddenly Nomal went silent. This was not right. Ingris wouldn't want her to behave like this. She got up, took the sock, and put it away in her chest. It took all the willpower she had, but she put on a brave face, and left her office. It was time to check on her people.

The dining room went silent as soon as she entered. It occured to her that she had not changed her clothes, or even washed herself since the incident. Her clothes were burned, tattered and soaking wet. Her face was covered in ash, blood and tears. Nomal didn't care one bit. She asked what the situation was. Datan snorted, and said that the settlement was doing quite fine under his guidance; food was abundant, and they had even made a slight profit in the trade. It seemed that he was quite good at it.

That was too much. Nomal couldn't take it. To know that after all that, the fortress didn't even need her... no. That was not something she could brave. Not without Ingris. She fled the dining room, and ran straight to the stockpile. Without hesitation, she opened up an entire barrel of wine and just started drinking. It tasted disgusting with the knowledge that it was Datan who had aquired it, but she needed the release.

Days went past, and soon weeks. All Nomal did now was sit in her office, drink wine, and enter fits of depression where she wept for what seemed an eternity. The fortress was doing well. She was in no state to go about her mayoral duties, but Datan had stepped up to the position. The people adored him. Months flew by, and eventually Datan was elected mayor, to replace Nomal. She had been demoted to his old position, the settlement's trader. He was too busy now to take care of it. Of course, Datan needed a new office now. He took hers, without even letting her remove her few belongings. The only other office was a much smaller, dank little room one level below the mayor's office. Nomal didn't care. It was cramped, dark, cold and it reeked of death, but she was long past caring about something as trivial as that.

More and more waves of immigrants swept through, until there were hundreds of dwarfs where once there had been but seven. A Baron had even arrived to live in the mighty fortress, which inevitably gave Datan an inflated sense of self importance. It was his fortress, after all, and it was good enough for a Duke.

Nomal had been trying to take her mind away from the dark places it so easily fell to now. She tried her hand and stonecrafting, carpentry, architecture... but none of it held her attention for very long. One of the taskmasters took pity on her, and gave her something to do to keep her from the wine.

Datan's office needed new furniture, and she had been told to move the old pieces out to be replaced with some garish, flaunty items. As soon as she opened the door, all the memories came flooding back. Looking around at her old room, and her old things made what happened to Ingris all those years ago seem but yesterday. She was shaking violently, but she was keeping it together. Barely.

Then her heart stopped. Her eyes fell on the chest lying at the other end of the room. She knew what was in there. Datan had huge personal quarters, he would never even think of storing something in his office. No, Nomal knew that it was still in there. It seemed to be a huge distance away, and each step sapped her strength, her bravery, until she was right at the chest

She stood there staring at it for the longest time. After an eternity of indecision, she tried to open it. It was a sturdy chest, and she was shaking so much it took some effort indeed. The lid fell back, and the filthy, ruined old sock was staring right back at her.

Nomal stopped shaking immediately. Calmly and quietly, she closed the chest and moved over to the door. She shut it and locked it. Then she walked toward the center of the room, readied her pick that she still carried at all times, and took her own life. Nomal lay there, her blood running freely, thinking about that one sock, and the wonderful man it had belonged to.

My dwarven ocean liner seemed a little inconsequential after that.


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Wow, that was pretty intense. Were all of the events in-game?

"Most of the immediate are was ocean."

I'm guessing you're missing a word or two here.


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