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What do yuo think?
Is my idea sound? 24%  24%  [ 4 ]
Or is it major fail? 76%  76%  [ 13 ]
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Gondana
 Post subject: Fixing up the one where Roy comes back
PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:24 am 
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(AKA The worlds slowest train wreck)

I know that there is already a thread on this strip but I realy whanted you to read this.

The problem is your stretching it out to much.

Shorten the middle of #1, get rid of the 1st half of #2, fuze #1 and #2 together. Set #3 to #2 and totaly scrap #4.

Vuala, classic

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SwitheKun
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Dunno, I kinda like it. mostly cos I missed Roy and I like the Roy and Marth comics (and the Roy, Marth and Link ones).

Though as for the last one, SHE MISSED PICHU T-T

Would have been funny if there was just a last panel showing Pichu pawing at the door trying to get in "CHUUUUU~"
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how u get so smart

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Hoshika-Pichu
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SwitheKun wrote:
Though as for the last one, SHE MISSED PICHU T-T


I'm right here.

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