AWKWARD ZOMBIE

I never thought about that, Katie. :awesome:

Pits face in the second panel he's in looks familiar.

It is painfully obvious it could have been done better - this we know - but how? I think a careful review of more action-oriented comics would shed more light on the matter.

I'm probably going to get yelled at this, but I digress; read more manga.

I'm still trying to figure out whether Captain Falcon is lying on his back or front. And possible places where Ike's sword could be lodged.

Poor, poor, Meta Knight.

Oh I just realized: panel five; feet don't bend in the middle, but at the joint. Either that or Ike has monkey toes, you tell me.

Does the word 'cartoon' mean anything to you?


Also, Ike does not wear yellow boots.

The loose ends of Ike's bandana only make one appearance, and that's in the panel he first appears in. In the rest, they've magically disappeared. His cape chases after them by the second-last panel too, because it's not small enough to be hidden behind his back. It flares out and the edges should be visible. And then I guess the cape was removed while he was falling so you could see more than a big rectangular mass falling.

To be fair the amount of panels do suggest the true amount of time it can take to "pop" a "Smash Ball".

But you could've cut everything up to Ike saying "Aww..." - so that's only eight panels you didn't need to draw (if I'm being really harsh).



I like the design for the Halberd's "alternate mode".

I like it.

I liked the whole frustrating dash for the final smash ball sequence because, man, you drop one of those on a four-person battle, and everyone starts scrambling like monkeys with poor bladder control to grab it.

The main problem I had is I didn't realize what stage it was until the last panel, so I got a little confused.

I laughed at the beginning, cuz I was just playing a match as metaknight. He really can't break the freaking thing, he just kinda scratches it. Maybe like..2 of his attacks MIGHT break it.

Stupid pansy booty blue kirby thing.

Good comic.

VOOOOOOLTROOOOOON

Did anyone else have a hard time following this one?

I did at first, but I haven't played in forever, but I got it eventually.

I rather like the poke at the time it takes for Ike to do his smash attack.

There are a lot of inconsistencies in the details though, as people graciously pointed out, and Pit is missing the glowy halo things on his left arm.

Also I'm sorry but I can't stop laughing at the extremely lazy renditions of Pit's weapon. XD

oh yeah gundam halberd is pretty cool

By the way, what actually happens in a situation like this? I'm thinking whoever hit it last gets the Final Smash.

edit: oh hay page get