AWKWARD ZOMBIE

I think it did come out too confusing for the most part, so sorry for that.


How to draw feminine faces, the Katie Tiedrich method:
Step 1: Don't
Step 2:

close enough i guess

and that resto druid scares me

Somebody really should make this comic into a Flash animation.

Nice work thar.

Wow. I don't even WoW.

It's still funny seeing how a spirit/nymph/fairy/whateverthehellitis can cast it's infinitely long line and catch someone dead 5 feet up to 1000 miles from wherever the graveyard is.

Yeah well you don't actually look at the bosses much when you're a Resto druid.

Justin Timberlake. And that commercial's only humor was in the part where he gets repeatedly hit in the groin by running into a mailbox.

I forgot who the managerie is for.
Really nice comic. You didn't even have to kick a puppy or put on gradient glasses to make this one great.

Critiques: I hate to admit it, I had to reread. Didn't see the fishing line the first time through. The humor is solid, the reference not to obscure, but it's a little hard to figure out what is going on in those first two panels of whzzzzing. Maybe if there were a panel of the initial casting of the line, or at least the snagging of the hook on the corpse, it would be more clear. Simple continuity.

QFT

That's the "YOU ARE NOT A GUEST" "robot" in panel one?

I thought an actual robot was out of place in a WoW comic - this is more of an elemental golem or something - so makes more sense.

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Pretty lady.

Pretty backgrounds.

Clever lady feet.

Noble attempt at tree shading.

Despite or maybe because of the confusion the punchline works very well.

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"Have you ever wondered why <video game quirk>" Is a lousy way to start a comic. Or end it. It's just lousy in general.

The problem with the whizzing across panels 2 & 3 is that it implies action is moving from left to right. I didn't notice the field parting the first time through.

I had no idea from which direction the guy face-planted in panel four,
possibly due to the issues with the previous panels, but mostly because he doesn't look like he's moving.

Where's the whizzing coming from if the rod has no reel?

I can't believe there's no dragged-across-a-cactus gag. (Or maybe that's a plus?)

Suggestions:
Stop playing World of Warcraft, it sucks.

Ever thought about submitting one of your WoW comics to the official site?

Just saying. I hear the current prize is a ticket to blizzcon. which is at least worth a few hundred dollars to an insane fan if you don't want to go yourself.

(yes, I registered JUST TO SAY THAT. GOD WHY IS IT 3AM)

Sounds like someone's asking for a banning to me!

maybe,
but then again i play a resto shaman

Quoted for truth.

Right, right, Timberlake, the "Hey you" said affirming masculinity to me.

And people sliding along slamming into stuff is inherently funny. At least if you grew up on looney toons anyway.