AWKWARD ZOMBIE

Just a thought, wouldn't this be more helpful if it was sticked?






Edit: Also, I can revise essays and help with Russian.

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I can help people who are in 1st and 2nd year German classes with grammar and conjugation. I'm pretty good with that.

Okay guys I need to write like a paragraph and i'm done my Essay.

I also need someone to review (just look for mistakes please) it, And I have to be under 500 words.

So I need some ideas for why The internet is today's evolution. or why it isn't a menace. after I'm done I'll ask for it to be reviewed

I can review your essay.

Thank you, should I private message you it when I'm finished?

No problema. Just so that I know what I'm in for, what level of English class are you in?


And no, Ame, I don't know exactly what you mean. I am writing no such essay.

I'm grade seven.

I don't think it will be all that hard.

Okay. Cool. I've only gone up to a 202 class level, so I was just making sure.

Oh, I get what you're saying, all right.

Does this make sense guys? "If I was stuck on a deserted island, I would bring a computer with an internet connection. I could find How to make a boat, fish make a shelter or even set up a longterm home there."

also Mrs. Leclair when you google this i just want to let you know I did not steal this paragraph kthx

How does a computer get an internet connection on an island.

There were only a few grammatical errors. Other than that, it's fine.

Maybe:

"If I were stuck on a deserted island, I would bring a computer with an internet connection. With it, I could find how to make a boat, fish, make a shelter, or even set up a long term home on the island."

Since you're in seventh grade, I'm guessing that your teacher is relatively easygoing with the commas. I got the idea of what you were saying, but I offered a few phrase changes to make it a little easier to read.

Thanks, when I saw that I said 'was' instead of 'were' I facepalmed.