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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:55 pm 
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I'll start deleting them if you won't stay on topic.

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Practise drawing shoes/feet. And tits. You can never be too good at drawing tits.

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Um....what's with the posting on the front page?


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-I agree'd with Spoony, backgrounds are kinda bland.
-Detail into limbs (arms, legs, elbows) would be nice, kinda weird since they're all like noodles.
-Ambiguous genders is something we can all agree on, like Star said, they're tits not triangles.
- A personal one, moar metroid >.>

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I think the only thing I can think of would be the whole backgrounds thing.

Like, I like how you color them, simple but to the point. Like in this comic:
http://www.awkwardzombie.com/comic1-040907.php

But then as you continue reading through the comic, the backgrounds go from a machine-like place to a solid gray wall.

BUT I MEAN I'm able to look past it because of how much attention you put into the characters.

Also, I suppose sometimes, the action lines you do don't look like action lines. SUCH AS:
http://www.awkwardzombie.com/comic1-112607.php

The first panel, with the "falling THUD" action line looks just like a curved wire hovering above the poor dead guy. :0

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Your comics need more Jewish.


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L Lawliet wrote:
Your comics need more Jewish.


Elaborate or die. :colbert:

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Merlin wrote:
L Lawliet wrote:
Your comics need more Jewish.


Elaborate or die. :colbert:
When I look at the comics, I should stop and say "Wow. That's pretty daisies Jewish."

Better?


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The majority of her comics don't have anything to do with Judaism.

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Merlin wrote:
The majority of her comics don't have anything to do with Judaism.
Yeah, that's my main complaint. She needs to make more Jew comics.


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MORE JEWS, GOT IT

EVERYTHING ELSE, WHATEVER


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Zomnambulist wrote:
MORE JEWS, GOT IT

EVERYTHING ELSE, WHATEVER


And this is why AZ > life.

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I'm rather divided on the font. I know it might seem trivial, but a good font can really help the style of a comic. Which is why I'm divided, I'm so used to the bold sans-serif type of font that AZ has used for so long it seems to fit. I dunno.

Oh, and AZ needs a favicon. Like, now.

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Oh, and more tits.

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Oh, and more Ganondorf facebattling Tingle.

Fix'd.

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