AWKWARD ZOMBIE

So, a bit of background is required for this one. I don't really do the whole porn thing. But someone on dA asked for a nudie of Riku, and at first I was like "haha wat I don't even know you that's weird". But then after I mentioned it to Sloth and Zang, they were like "do eet", so peer pressure and whoops here's my first attempt at a mostly-nude:


NSFW obviously.

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Comic117 ... riku_l.jpg


Also, if I just royally fucked anything up, critique is welcome.

Since she's laying on her back I feel like her breasts should be flatter. They look sort of like how they would look if she was upright.

Actually, I'd already talked to princess brothel about this. The left arm is propping up the left breast (he suggested I change the thickness of the line to help indicate that), and also kiiiind of doing the same for the right, but the right arm is also thrown back which would pull that breast up a bit. although I have fixed the shape of it so that it looks more flat like it should.

In that case, I think it's the placement of the nipples that's throwing me off. The nipples make her breasts look like they're hanging, instead of at rest on her rib cage.

Alright, fixed (I think) what Cori was talking about and the color/line things princess brothel suggested in chat.

Disclaimer: I have very little talent for drawing, and was working with MSPaint for some of these. The ones that aren't MSPaint are /really/ obvious, and no base images linked are mine.

Basically, there's a play-by-post game I participate in; Fourth in a series, but I've only played in the latest. Some of the members are really rather...gifted with art, and produce some drawings based on it.

In a tribute to some of them, I made these:



Neon Impromptu; Base image was this.



Neon Flint; Base image is this.



Neon Aeront; Base Image here.

All my other "art" is done on paper and I have no way to share it via the Internet; Besides that, all I really draw are eyes. Lots and lots of eyes.

Anything else is just screenshots, like the following:



Linked because this one is a Fullscreen Screenshot.

Also linked because large.

Yeah that's about all I've got, imagery wise.

I can't really comment on the screenshots, but those images are definitely much better than when I first started out. The best way to improve, really, is to just keep trying to add details where you can and work on putting things in the right place. Someone once said something I very much agree with, which is that everyone has 1000 hours of work to put into anything before they get "good" at it, so keep that in mind and just draw a ton of whatever.

Here is the last thing I did digitally, looking for critique on how to do better more than praise (though if you could sugar coat any criticism that would probably help my pathetic ego). As in, specific things that are wrong with it:

This might be completely insane and overwhelming but I'm planning to do a stop motion animation for my next personal artwork.

Who knows if I'm going completely over my head please raise your hand.

hand drawn animation is fast compared to stop-motion

speaking from experience

High poly count model for a Dota 2 set I'm working on.

Look pretty daisies good. How good are you at texturing?

(keeping word filter because lol)

I'm all right, not the best, but most Dota 2 textures are baked from a high poly mesh, meaning you can still get all that fancy detail without having to hand paint it.

I'll have to look into that, because I'm horrible at texture work

I find I almost always have difficulty drawing anything in perspective, so I'm trying to challenge myself to understand it better.



This is just something I'm trying to sketch up as a personal artwork idea for an interior of a cafe or something. Are there any noticeable problems?