AWKWARD ZOMBIE

Edited my post.
I'M RETARDED.
DERP.

Ok, i know that Relicanth cant learn sing i where going to put him using Yawn, but i needed more panels to do that.
Blaze is the name of my 2nd Blaziken, i dont care if you dont like it.
Paint is the worst way to make comics, i dont have in this moment flash(at least for me is hard to draw in MSPaint).
My english is bad because in this country the main language isn't english.

The comic means that the flute makes a sound,that can make the pokemon wake up, it had to be harder than a another pokemon hit, that maked he bleed.
Sorry if the point wasn't clear and/or funny

*sigh* i think i started with the wrong foot...

edit: this was pretty offensive, i better changed it(i was tired and pretty annoyed with other things when i saw this)


im not scared >_>.

Wow.

WOW.


WOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW.

Just a heads up. Double posting is annoying, your signature bothers me and watch your mouth.

Great first impression so far.

No this is a horrible first impression

Thank you Captain Obvious.

Failed Sarcasm is Failed.

You all fail.

/thread

Language and general use of smiley fail.

My booty isn't scared. €: -¥- :{(

Fix'd

I actually liked the idea but it wasn't executed very well. I changed some things, hopefully it can make more sense but it's still basically the same.

Oh yeah, also, this forum is for Katie's comic not anyone else's (I don't think ).

Edit: Also, first panel. Yeah I just realized that I should probably switch Blaziken's and Ralicanth's boxes. My bad
Edit 2: Gaahh! My bad again, I forgot to make him say "Gaah!" in the last panel. That's what the empty space is for.
Edit 3: I'm such a dumbass, I also forgot to put a motion line in the last panel to show that the flute was actually being thrown away and not just randomly floating in space.

The idea itself isn't really that funny.
I'd pinpoint it more on the idea of "How can a flute possibly wake something up instead of putting it to sleep?"
I'd draw a comic where the trainer tries to wake their pokemon up using the Blue Flute and instead they fall asleep themselves.

Well, I think the blue flute is an actual item in the game that is supposed to wake pokemon up.

You draw human faces pretty well, and the picture of the Blaziken in the last panel is good. However, the comic would benefit from more extreme facial expressions in the relevant panels.

There may be a decent flute/music/hypnotic melody joke in there somewhere - but it hasn't shown itself yet.

There are other colored flutes too ya know!
Yellow - Confusion recovery
Red - Infatuation cure
Black & white - One repels pokemon (like using a repel) the other draws them in... I forgot what one did what...

Thanks DND.
Yeah, I tried to do a more interesting/funny face in the last panel but I'm not very good at that.



I can definitely see something with the red flute. Only problem is I'm not very funny so I have no joke