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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:51 pm 
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Well...I've been an artist all my life, as for criticizing, The best type is constructive, but being an artist you want the compliments and such, but you never want negative comments. Its the same as it is for everything else in life. Now this is the only thread I could find on showing art so I'm gonna go ahead. :D Sorry if there big, I gotsted sorry computer skills.

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You don't need to waste a post in a thread to see if its locked.

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Those are the only ones I have on my computer btw ._.'

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These are awesome.


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El Gaspo.

Does you has dA? :awesome:

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Constructive Critisism:

The body proportion is slightly off in the first, second and fourth pictures, even if it was intentional, it still juts out as the first thing I noticed and it detracts from the rest of the picture.

If you accentuate key details with better line work and shading, it creates a better sence of depth and clarity. Also, the realistic style used on the bodies contrasts heavily with the manga faces.

You have alot of skill and the drawings are very well done, but they're not universally appealing. If you open up and allow your style to be less rigid, I think you'll be downright badass. Never limit your own creativity.

That said, you're a good artist, keep up the good work :D


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These are pretty good.

But don't be a dick about it.


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;_;....I thought the thread got locked up and somebody erased my pics...and thanks for the critique :P. :D.

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John wrote:
These are pretty good.

But don't be a dick about it.
Haha, sorry. Don't blame him for the title of the thread. I changed it when I split the thread and locked the other one.

Sylvestis Drake, go ahead and change the title, if you like.


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I agree with John about the faces contrasting with the way you draw their bodies. Their bodies are realistic and flowing while their faces have an anime style and their hair is jagged and cemented. Changing the way you draw hair and the style of eyes you use will probably give it a more realistic look without having to practise drawing heads an entirely different way than what you're used to.

Your proportions are well done. Just a few mistakes here and there, although my biggest gripe is that every guy you draw is as short as the average woman. They need to be atleast another head (I use the size of the head for my anatomy...) taller, and usually it seems to be the legs were you miss this.

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I like the robot.


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Who doesn't like the robot?

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Whoa, shit, there's a dude with the user name John. Sorry, hope I'm not stealin' yer thunder or anything.

I'd like to see more of your works if you have them Drake, I like the coloring, it's very impressive.


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These are pretty good.

But don't be a dick about it.
Haha, sorry. Don't blame him for the title of the thread. I changed it when I split the thread and locked the other one.


Oh, you.


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